Few on the Lost Island-chp. 2

"Alright, women and their children are on the life boats first."
"Life vests, getcha life vests here!"
"Whoa, watch your step."
Me and my mom get to the front of the line, finally. We step into the boat and sit down. i shiver.
"Ummm.. could i get a blanket please? i'm really cold." i ask.
"Sure thing. Anything else?"
"No thanks, i'm good. thank you though."
i wrap the blanket around myself. i change my mind and wrap it around me and my mom. she smiles at me.


-3 hours later-


i feel my self being lifted up and i am placed down on warm sand. i rise and look around the island for my mom. then i see her. Her blue, frozen body being placed into a hole in the ground.
"MOM! NOO!!!!" i yell as i run over to her. "Please, please let me talk to her one last time."
"well, ok. but make it fast." a worker tells me.
"mom, i'm so sorry. i can't leave you. I will stay on this island forever. i will start a family here. i promise i will do anything for you, mom. i love you." i say. i stand back up and run as fast as i can to the other side of the island. i sit down on a big rock, curl up, and sob.

Brenda Torres' Life- chp. 1

"Crap! Stupid mario." Byran says, as he dies.(we are playing super mario brothers on his wii.)
"Haha!!! im beating you at your own game!!!" i say.
"Awwww, shut up..." he tells me," your just jealous that you, you, ummmmm........Ha!! i know!!! you can't catch a football! see! catch!"
i reach over with one hand and 'pluck' it out of the air, my eyes still focused on the game. i smile.
"Man, your like a ninja or something!!" as he leans over and kisses me on my cheek.
he grabs his Ipod and turns on his favorite song, Handlebars. "he is so weird," i say to myself.
"Oh my gosh. you are terrible. you know that is my absolute least favorite song!" i tell him, " hey, i gotta go! i'll see you tomorrow at school, k?"
"ok! see you later!"

just went to a concert!!!!!

IT WAS SUUUUUUUUPPPPEEEEEEEEERRRRRRR LONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

for 9 pieces it took almost 2 hours!!!!!!

it was fun tho!:P

Few on the Lost Island- chp. 1

"Are you sure you want me to do this captain?" he asked.

"Yes, i would rather have 20 have the opportunity to live than none, Christopher." the captain says.

"Ok, i will set up the life boats."

"Good."

~10 minutes later~

"Mom? where's Charlotte and Dad?" I ask my mom.

"Sweetie, they were in the room that flooded first. They drowned. I'm so sorry Katie." my mom responds, with tears in her eyes. This is the worst cruise ever.

Hope you guys liked it!!!!!!!!!!!

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Ok, i am really bored right now. My sister just got back from canada, my brother stuffed my ds with sand(its not broken), my mom is having tummy problems, and my dad might have to spend his week at work(AGAIN!!!). im not the happiest person out there right now.

i will start writing my story either tonite or tomorrow afternoon. the upside of today is that i get to go to youthgroup tonite and see Marrissa and Brianne!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!

yay!! i have a blog now!!!!!!! i can't wait until the 31 because i get to go to music camp for nine days!!!!!!!!!!! yay!!!!!!!!