Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Few on the Lost Island- chp. 1
"Are you sure you want me to do this captain?" he asked.
"Yes, i would rather have 20 have the opportunity to live than none, Christopher." the captain says.
"Ok, i will set up the life boats."
"Good."
~10 minutes later~
"Mom? where's Charlotte and Dad?" I ask my mom.
"Sweetie, they were in the room that flooded first. They drowned. I'm so sorry Katie." my mom responds, with tears in her eyes. This is the worst cruise ever.









Hope you guys liked it!!!!!!!!!!!
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5 comments:

  1. Luv it! :) Hahaha It's Good So Far! ^.~
    -Kathleen

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  2. When's The Next Chp Up? I'm Just Wondering, Are You going to Write the Other Story Too? /:)
    ~Kathleen:)~

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  3. ya, i am. the new one and the other one.
    thnx hannah!

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